Walter Bowne
Aug 5, 2024

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In last paragraph, move the dependent clause of whether it’s … to after the therefore for fluency and to avoid the comma splice.

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Walter Bowne
Walter Bowne

Written by Walter Bowne

This “trophy husband” writes fiction, poetry, narrative non-fiction, travel essays, music essays, book reviews, and essays about his belly button.

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